[IGSTK-Developers] Computer paper rough draft

[Stephen R. Aylward]

I've attached some quick comments.   I think the parts are there that 
are needed, but the role and benefits of the toolkit could be clarified 
a bit.

I didn't go into too much detail, since my suggestion might be totally 
off, but hopefully my comments in the intro are sufficient to carry my 
opinion.

Nice paper by the way - really useful to the project!   Documents some 
important decisions and the thought process behind them - REALLY GOOD!

Stephen


Kevin Gary wrote:
> All,
> 
> Attached is a very rough first draft of the Computer paper. It still needs
> a major subsection of the process section.
> 
> I'm sending this out in order to get feedback content-wise; the paper needs
> a good amount of wordsmithing to fit IEEE Computer's stylistic guidelines,
> so please save editorial comments for a later draft.
> 
> If you have a moment to scan the paper and provide feedback on the overall
> content and balance of the paper it would be very helpful.
> 
> Thanks,
> Kevin G.
> 
> 
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