[IGSTK-Developers] Computer paper rough draft

[Kevin Gary]

Stephen,

Thanks for the very informative comments. I like the outline, we
should discuss in Wednesday' tcon. I will be spending a good part of
tomorrow trying to beef up the paper, so if anyone else has more
comments please try to send them in.

The guest editor says we can have another week which will really help!

Kevin G.


Stephen R. Aylward wrote:
> 
> I've attached some quick comments.   I think the parts are there that 
> are needed, but the role and benefits of the toolkit could be clarified 
> a bit.
> 
> I didn't go into too much detail, since my suggestion might be totally 
> off, but hopefully my comments in the intro are sufficient to carry my 
> opinion.
> 
> Nice paper by the way - really useful to the project!   Documents some 
> important decisions and the thought process behind them - REALLY GOOD!
> 
> Stephen
> 
> 
> Kevin Gary wrote:
> 
>> All,
>>
>> Attached is a very rough first draft of the Computer paper. It still 
>> needs
>> a major subsection of the process section.
>>
>> I'm sending this out in order to get feedback content-wise; the paper 
>> needs
>> a good amount of wordsmithing to fit IEEE Computer's stylistic 
>> guidelines,
>> so please save editorial comments for a later draft.
>>
>> If you have a moment to scan the paper and provide feedback on the 
>> overall
>> content and balance of the paper it would be very helpful.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Kevin G.
>>
>>
>>
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