[IGSTK-Developers] My comments on the SPIE paper

[Kevin Gary]

I've added my mods and comments to Brian's version, mostly in the 
beginning sections
of the paper.  Thanks for your work Patrick.

K2


M. Brian Blake wrote:

>Patrick,
>
>Here are my comments on top of Andinets. Great job on the paper. Just added an additional statement or two in the requirements step and some wording changes throughout (mainly just my preferences of course).
>
>Best,
>
>Brian
>
>M. Brian Blake, Ph.D
>Associate Professor
>Georgetown University
>Washington, DC 20057
>mb7 at georgetown.edu
>http://www.cs.georgetown.edu/~blakeb/
>
>----- Original Message -----
>From: Andinet Enquobahrie <andinet.enqu at kitware.com>
>Date: Thursday, February 2, 2006 10:08 pm
>Subject: [IGSTK-Developers] My comments on the SPIE paper
>
>  
>
>>Hello Patrick,
>>
>>Good job! The paper is well-organized and contains lots of useful 
>>information for application development using IGSTK.  However, it 
>>needs 
>>several iterations of proof reading. I made minor changes 
>>throughout the 
>>paper. Find attached my revision.
>>
>>One major thing was the title. I found the title to be a bit 
>>confusing.  
>>I am not sure if we can still modify the title of the paper. If we 
>>can, 
>>I strongly encourage you to change it
>>
>>Current title:
>>
>>IGSTK: Framework and Example Applications Using an Open Source 
>>Toolkit 
>>for Image-Guided Surgery Applications
>>
>>My suggestions are
>>
>>-IGSTK: Open Source Toolkit for Image-Guided Surgery Applications
>>-Example Applications Using Image-Guided Surgery Toolkit (IGSTK)
>>
>>Then, after reading through the whole paper, I realized that we 
>>are ONLY 
>>presenting one example application i.e Needle biopsy Hence, the 
>>following title might be even more appropriate
>>
>>Development of an image guided needle biopsy application using 
>>Image-Guided Surgery Toolkit (IGSTK)
>>
>>Just a suggestion...
>>
>>Take a look at my other comments and let me know if you have questions
>>
>>-Andinet
>>
>>
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