[IGSTK-Developers] My comments on the SPIE paper

[Stephen R. Aylward]

I made some minor edits - I added mention of CMake and DART (IGSTK also 
uses those open-source applications).

Stephen

Kevin Gary wrote:
> I've added my mods and comments to Brian's version, mostly in the 
> beginning sections
> of the paper.  Thanks for your work Patrick.
> 
> K2
> 
> 
> M. Brian Blake wrote:
> 
>> Patrick,
>>
>> Here are my comments on top of Andinets. Great job on the paper. Just 
>> added an additional statement or two in the requirements step and some 
>> wording changes throughout (mainly just my preferences of course).
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Brian
>>
>> M. Brian Blake, Ph.D
>> Associate Professor
>> Georgetown University
>> Washington, DC 20057
>> mb7 at georgetown.edu
>> http://www.cs.georgetown.edu/~blakeb/
>>
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: Andinet Enquobahrie <andinet.enqu at kitware.com>
>> Date: Thursday, February 2, 2006 10:08 pm
>> Subject: [IGSTK-Developers] My comments on the SPIE paper
>>
>>  
>>
>>> Hello Patrick,
>>>
>>> Good job! The paper is well-organized and contains lots of useful 
>>> information for application development using IGSTK.  However, it 
>>> needs several iterations of proof reading. I made minor changes 
>>> throughout the paper. Find attached my revision.
>>>
>>> One major thing was the title. I found the title to be a bit 
>>> confusing.  I am not sure if we can still modify the title of the 
>>> paper. If we can, I strongly encourage you to change it
>>>
>>> Current title:
>>>
>>> IGSTK: Framework and Example Applications Using an Open Source 
>>> Toolkit for Image-Guided Surgery Applications
>>>
>>> My suggestions are
>>>
>>> -IGSTK: Open Source Toolkit for Image-Guided Surgery Applications
>>> -Example Applications Using Image-Guided Surgery Toolkit (IGSTK)
>>>
>>> Then, after reading through the whole paper, I realized that we are 
>>> ONLY presenting one example application i.e Needle biopsy Hence, the 
>>> following title might be even more appropriate
>>>
>>> Development of an image guided needle biopsy application using 
>>> Image-Guided Surgery Toolkit (IGSTK)
>>>
>>> Just a suggestion...
>>>
>>> Take a look at my other comments and let me know if you have questions
>>>
>>> -Andinet
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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Stephen R. Aylward, Ph.D.
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